Stannis is the One True King because he knows when to use less and fewer.
The No. 1 thing I don't want to see in the first paragraph of your novel is your character waking up. The No. 2 is a metaphor. #pubtip
Top 4 phrases to basically never write again: trials and tribulations little did he know but loves nothing more than Couldn't help but
All of the last 3 subs I read mentioned eye color on the 1st page. This is the LEAST IMPORTANT detail of all. Stop. #pubtip